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Band 7.5-8.5 — Pets in the City

More and more people living in small city apartments are keeping pets. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Keeping pets in small city apartments has become common in many countries. This essay will look at the advantages and disadvantages of this trend before reaching a balanced conclusion.

The benefits are mainly emotional and social. For people living alone in big cities — an ever-growing group — a cat or dog provides company, routine and affection that measurably reduce loneliness and stress; doctors note lower blood pressure and better mood among pet owners. Dogs in particular push owners to exercise and to meet people: daily walks create conversations and small friendships that apartment life otherwise rarely offers. In ageing societies, pets have even become a recognised support for elderly people living far from family. For families, caring for an animal also teaches children responsibility and kindness.

On the other hand, small apartments are a difficult environment for many animals. Dogs bred for space and activity can become anxious, noisy and destructive when left alone all day in a small flat, and their frustration becomes the neighbours' problem through barking and damaged shared spaces. Owning pets in cities is also demanding for humans: veterinary bills, shortages of pet-friendly housing and daily walks in all weather test the commitment of busy workers, and animals bought impulsively are too often abandoned when the reality becomes clear.

In conclusion, pets bring city dwellers real comfort and connection but can suffer in unsuitable homes with unprepared owners. The balance depends on the match: choosing an animal that suits apartment life, and an owner with the time and money to care for it properly. Done thoughtfully, the advantages prevail; done impulsively, both animal and owner lose.

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Phân tích: Dạng: Advantages & Disadvantages → Discuss both. Bố cục Adv/Disadv cân bằng: mỗi body 2 ý, kết không chọn phe mà nêu BIẾN SỐ quyết định (the match giữa con vật – chủ – căn hộ) — cách kết thông minh cho đề không hỏi opinion. Từ vựng: an ever-growing group, test the commitment, bought impulsively, cặp kết done thoughtfully… done impulsively — song song rút gọn phân từ. Ngữ pháp: câu ghép dùng dấu chấm phẩy đúng chức năng; danh từ hoá the reality becomes clear. Ngôn ngữ giản dị, chính xác — mẫu tốt cho học viên bắt chước được ngay.
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