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Band 7.5-8.5 — Foreign Languages: Start Early?

Some people think children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others believe it is better to begin in secondary school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think children should begin learning a foreign language in primary school, while others believe secondary school is soon enough. I side firmly with the earlier start, because young children learn languages more naturally and the benefits reach beyond the language itself.

Those who prefer a later start make practical points. Primary pupils are still mastering their mother tongue, and school hours spent on a foreign language must be taken from reading, writing and mathematics. Teenagers, they argue, study more efficiently: with better memory strategies and clearer motivation, a secondary student can cover in one year what a young child covers in three. Specialist language teachers are also scarce in primary schools. Timetables in primary schools, they add, are already crowded enough.

However, early learning has advantages that efficiency cannot replace. Young children absorb pronunciation and rhythm effortlessly, and those who start early typically reach higher final levels of fluency, speaking with more natural accents than those who begin as teenagers. Just as important, young children are fearless: they play with new words without embarrassment, while teenagers often stay silent for fear of mistakes. Starting early also builds cultural openness during the years when attitudes form, and learning a second language appears to sharpen children's general thinking rather than harm their first language, which studies show develops normally in bilingual pupils.

In conclusion, while secondary students may learn grammar faster, primary-age children gain better pronunciation, more confidence and more years of exposure — ideally through songs, games and stories rather than formal grammar. Language learning should therefore begin in primary school, with secondary school deepening what childhood has already planted.

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Phân tích: Dạng: Discuss Both Views. Bố cục: phe đối phương được trình bày bằng luận điểm mạnh nhất của họ (hiệu suất học của teenager) — bài Discuss chỉ thuyết phục khi Body 1 không phải “bù nhìn rơm”. Từ vựng: mother tongue, for fear of mistakes, cultural openness, what childhood has already planted — ẩn dụ gieo trồng khép bài đẹp. Ngữ pháp: cấu trúc so sánh lồng (cover in one year what a young child covers in three), mệnh đề quan hệ tách (…their first language, which studies show develops normally…). Lập luận đủ sâu, cấu trúc dễ bắt chước — mẫu luyện tập lý tưởng.
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